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The Shekspear says that in his poem "All the world a stage" all the men and women in this world are the actors.They act their role on the stage and then leave this world.The poet says that in the forth stage of a man ,he becames a soldier.He takes many strange and odd oaths, and keeps the beared and looks like the pard.He jealouses his friends and coligues for honour.He quarrels every one sudden and quick.He trys to seek the bubble reputation by hook or by crook.He is very emotional in thier eomtions even he stands in the canon,s mouth. Its mean , he prepaires himself for every harrdals and hadrships .In this stage of his life he is very stout and full of streangth.|||[In Shakespeare's poetry, "(title of poem here)"] states "All the world a stage" [all the men and women in this world are the actors ----- where did this came from!?!?!. . . ]. [Actors] act their role[s] on stage and then leave this world [what???? explain????. . .]. [Shakespeare claims a person becomes a soldier in the fourth stage of a man. . .] He takes many strange and odd oaths and keeps the beared [bearded?. . .] and looks like the pard [the what?. . .]. [Shakespeare is jealous over] his friends and [colleagues] for honour.He quarrels every one sudden and quick [what?. . . rephrase. . .].He [tries] to seek the bubble reputation by hook or by crook [what???? rephrase. . .].





[I can't even continue because I don't understand what you are writing about. . .please rephrase this paragraph. . .and make it sense!. . .Also. . .use the spelling check. . .]





He is very emotional in thier eomtions even he stands in the canon,s mouth. Its mean , he prepaires himself for every harrdals and hadrships .In this stage of his life he is very stout and full of streangth.|||Mac thank you

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The Shakespeare says that in his poem "All the world a stage" all the men and women in this world are the actors.They act their role on the stage and then leave this world.The poet says that in the forth stage of a man ,he becomes a soldier.He takes many strange and odd oaths, and keeps the bear ed and looks like the pa rd.He jealous es his friends and cliques for hon our.He quarrels every one sudden and quick.He trays to seek the bubble reputation by hook or by crook.He is very emotional in their emotions even he stands in the canon,s mouth. Its mean , he prepares himself for every harridans and hardships .In this stage of his life he is very stout and full of strength.





but it doesn't really make sense, you need to look at your grammar too.|||If you are not smart enough to use spell check then I am not going to help you on grammar.